User:Shemley1823/2016 Senegalese constitutional referendum/AngusLi6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shemley1823


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shemley1823/2016_Senegalese_constitutional_referendum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2016 Senegalese constitutional referendum

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey! I think this is a promising first draft - a lot of it seems to be in outline form which is totally fine, but it does look like it will serve as a major expansion to the original article. It may be good to convert the Background section from just a list of the amendments to something more thematically organized, perhaps with subsections for the historical context of the amendment and each of its broad policy areas. The backlash subsection can be incorporated into a Reactions section maybe, which could then give a more thorough treatment of responses by international and African parties. The lead will probably also need to be expanded, but I understand that that will probably have to wait until the rest of the article is done. Nice work overall!