User:Shena Murphy/Anna-Brita Stenström/Gizelleg25 Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the lead try to add a bit more personal information about the person such as age and DOB. Also try to add in where she is from and/or where she grew up as well as adding where she attended school.

All the content looks good! From what I see she has done A LOT and her work is hilarious for adding "fuck".

There is not a lot of balance in the page, I mentioned in the lead about adding more personal information.

The references list looks great! All the citations look organized and correct.

With organization, of course it is spread out but I also assume this is still the draft... you guys got this!!!