User:Shena Murphy/Anna-Brita Stenström/Sampoidk Peer Review

General info
Shena Murphy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shena Murphy/Anna-Brita Stenström
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Anna-Brita Stenström

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Good job on the lead. It shows everything that it needs to show. It is a bit long but it shouldn't be a problem.

Content

I see you edited it to include links to different wikipedia pages and added more citations. Your original draft needed more content because the sections only had a sentence or two. Good job on adding enough sources so you could add more content.

Tone

The tone is neutral.

Sources

I see you added more sources which is the main criticism I originally had.