User:SherifaOsman/Ahmad Sah l Bahmani Mausoleum/Deebdina Peer Review

General info
SherifaOsman
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SherifaOsman/Ahmad_Sah_l_Bahmani_Mausoleum?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article needs some language edits. The language used, while clear to experts or students of art history, may not be accessible to general wikipedia audience. Linking the technical terms, such as Jalis and squinches to other wikipedia pages could help resolve this issue.

Adding visuals to the text will complement the descriptive parts, if available.