User:Sherly-ann-Ville-gas/Choose an Article

Option 1

 * Lucid dream
 * Article Evaluation
 * Of the three articles that I have chosen, I would dare to say that this is the best of all. The best proof of this being that it was removed from the list of Social sciences and society good articles. The Discussions page "offers suggestions for improving the article and meeting the criteria for a good article." It also says that if these problems are treated, it could return to the list, but I must say, they are not supercial problems especially the second one. The two problems appear to be content ones, and are: "its needless verbosity" and "the instances of pseudo psychology." This last one makes me think there also could be evidence and research problems since pseudo psychology is considered, as its name says, false. To solve this, I think that it is not only necessary to eliminate the parts of the article with pseudo psychology and therefore their references, but also add a section that talks about the pseudo psychology of lucid dreaming vs its psychology based on science. As a separate topic, a section on whether lucid dreaming is good or bad for us would be a good addition.
 * Of the three articles that I have chosen, I would dare to say that this is the best of all. The best proof of this being that it was removed from the list of Social sciences and society good articles. The Discussions page "offers suggestions for improving the article and meeting the criteria for a good article." It also says that if these problems are treated, it could return to the list, but I must say, they are not supercial problems especially the second one. The two problems appear to be content ones, and are: "its needless verbosity" and "the instances of pseudo psychology." This last one makes me think there also could be evidence and research problems since pseudo psychology is considered, as its name says, false. To solve this, I think that it is not only necessary to eliminate the parts of the article with pseudo psychology and therefore their references, but also add a section that talks about the pseudo psychology of lucid dreaming vs its psychology based on science. As a separate topic, a section on whether lucid dreaming is good or bad for us would be a good addition.


 * Sources
 * Wendt, A. N. (2020, 25 septiembre). The Problem of the Task. Pseudo-Interactivity as an Experimental Paradigm of Phenomenological Psychology. Frontiers. https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fpsyg.2020.00855/full
 * Soffer-Dudek, N. (2020, 25 septiembre). Are Lucid Dreams Good for Us? Are We Asking the Right Question? A Call for Caution in Lucid Dream Research. Frontiers. https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fnins.2019.01423/full?&utm_source=Email_to_authors_&utm_medium=Email&utm_content=T1_11.5e1_author&utm_campaign=Email_publication&field=&journalName=Frontiers_in_Neuroscience&id=516657

Option 2

 * History of corsets
 * Article Evaluation
 * Overall, I consider this to be a good article, especially for its organization. However, it has been rated as Start-Class on the project's quality scale. This may be because not all claims have a citation, this is the only weak point that I found but that does not mean it is not an important one. The main reason I chose this article was because I believe adding information on how corsets have helped reduce back pain from scoliosis, and their correlation with back braces would bring a fresh perspective to the garment and be educational. Perhaps it would help it rise through the classifications, but this is just a basic idea from which I should seek more information.
 * Overall, I consider this to be a good article, especially for its organization. However, it has been rated as Start-Class on the project's quality scale. This may be because not all claims have a citation, this is the only weak point that I found but that does not mean it is not an important one. The main reason I chose this article was because I believe adding information on how corsets have helped reduce back pain from scoliosis, and their correlation with back braces would bring a fresh perspective to the garment and be educational. Perhaps it would help it rise through the classifications, but this is just a basic idea from which I should seek more information.


 * Sources
 * Department of Pediatric Orthopedics and Traumatology, PMU. (2018). Application of the SPINECOR dynamic corrective brace in treating idiopathic scoliosis (83(1) 1-4). https://doi.org/10.31139/chnriop.2018.83.1.01
 * Impact of orthopedic treatment on the quality of life of adolescents with idiopathic scoliosis: A cross-sectional study. (2017, September 1). ScienceDirect. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1877065717303408
 * Deimling, V. U. (1995, 1 octubre). [Long-term effect of brace treatment on spinal decompensation in idiopathic scoliosis. A comparison of Milwaukee brace--Chêneau corset]. PubMed. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/7610709/
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2544783/pdf/bmj00269-0052.pdf
 * Seleshanko, K. (2012). Bound & Determined: A Visual History of Corsets, 1850-1960 (Dover Fashion and Costumes) (Illustrated ed.). Dover Publications. https://books.google.com.pr/books?hl=es&lr=&id=OmbCAgAAQBAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PP1&dq=19th+century+doctors+and+corsets&ots=176r4rCtR-&sig=eG1tG0efFMlNBpsxpwb7EBP04IA&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false
 * Thakur, M. (2016, 27 diciembre). The Corset Affair by Manjari Thakur :: SSRN. SSNR. https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=2890518

Option 3

 * Dark chocolate
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is quite well structured, it is a good base. However, it is that, a base and that is the reason it has been rated as Stub-Class on the project's quality scale. I think it needs to abound more in topics such as its creation by the Aztecs and Mayans, and the debate of whether it is beneficial for health or not. This last subject was discussed on the talk page. Despite this, the most important aspect that it needs to improve is to put additional citations for verification, as it has a template message suggesting it.
 * This article is quite well structured, it is a good base. However, it is that, a base and that is the reason it has been rated as Stub-Class on the project's quality scale. I think it needs to abound more in topics such as its creation by the Aztecs and Mayans, and the debate of whether it is beneficial for health or not. This last subject was discussed on the talk page. Despite this, the most important aspect that it needs to improve is to put additional citations for verification, as it has a template message suggesting it.


 * Sources
 * Petyaev IM and Bashmakov YK (2017) Dark Chocolate: Opportunity for an Alliance between Medical Science and the Food Industry? Front. Nutr. 4:43. doi: 10.3389/fnut.2017.00043
 * Cardiovascular Benefits of Dark Chocolate? (17: 54). (2015, October). https://doi.org/10.1007/s11936-015-0419-5

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