User:Shg7D1/Empirical distribution function/Jx2022 Peer Review

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Shg7D1


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 * Empirical distribution function
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(Sorry I originally post this on the Talk page)

1.     Lead section

·      This wiki page has a concise introductory sentence that summarizes the main idea of the article. The second paragraph mentions “It converges with probability 1 to that underlying distribution, …”, which seems a little unclear. Rephrase the sentence can help clarify the main point here.

2.     Article

·      The majority of content in this paper contains mathematical formulas and definitions about each kind of calculation derived based on the mathematical formulas. In the “Mean Square Error” section, only the mathematical formula was provided, and the definitions of the experiment variables were unclear. It would be helpful to clarify what these letters stand for and the meanings behind superscripts and subscripts.

3.     References

·      This article used several book references to provide fundamental definitions of the formulas, which is very helpful to gain a general understanding of the basic principles behind each mathematical component. In addition to these book chapters, I feel including examples from current papers/research can be helpful to provide some understandings of the real-life applications for these mathematical models.