User:Shilohf/Randyland/Bibliography

Proposal
I am modifying the start-class article, “Randyland”. My main focus is on adding information into the history section of this article, and fixing the sentences that need paraphrasing. I have found several sources that give background information on Randy Gilson and how he started this art form. I also plan on adding a definition of the art form that is used in Randyland. In addition to this, I will work on revising a few sentences that have been taken directly from the sources. Hopefully these changes will improve the article’s rating, and overall quality.