User:Shirareb/Lumbricidae/Tannerhmgiles Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shirareb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Shirareb/Lumbricidae


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lumbricidae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content

The content added to the article is relevant and fairly up to date but I think more could be included about the life, anatomy, feeding and behaviors of the species. It seems to focus a lot on the range of the species and not much else.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral and not heavily biased. It strictly states facts about the range of the species. There isn’t much information to assess but the information provided so far is neutral.

Sources and References

You seem to have a lot of good sources but very little information from each source. You have a lot on the location of the species but not a lot of information about the species itself. I think your sources seem credible and useful but I think you need more topic variety.

Organization

There are only three ranges, one being a list of genera, so I think that the organization is choppy because there isn’t much flow from one topic to the next.

Images and Media

I think this article could benefit from more information and if you added some visuals.