User:ShirokuroPanda

About me
My favorite characters are from Moomins. I have read books and comics of Moomins and also watched TV shows and movies. In my free time I like to do cleaning, baking, reading and yoga. Yoga helps reduce stress, develop strength, and function muscles. I'm allergic to pollen.

My Wikipedia interests
If I'm going to work on Wikipedia as a volunteer, I would like to find out if the citation articles are still active. Some websites do not exist anymore. Some articles are removed for many different reasons. If the information sites are not there, I would like to find some other resource that has the same information. If I could find that I would like to update the information.

Article evaluation
I thought about what is a worldwide thing everybody likes, and it doesn't matter age or gender. It's a gummy bear. I was interested how the tiny bear shaped gummy started spreading smiles in the world, I visited the gummy bear article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: its citations, its articles update, and its completeness.

Articles update
As I mentioned it on citations section, almost half of links are not found. I searched sources to see if I can find these sites. I found out about that the one link is you have to click and see more detail because it doesn't change the URL. There were new websites for these links that was not found. Some report wasn't on the website anymore. Most of these links retrieved were 2013, these need to be updated.

Completeness
It is a clear that the gummy bear is a global selling product. There isn't any information about how many and which country sell the gummy bear. I think this is necessary information to add on this page.

Summary
In short, this page has good information about gummy bear. However, a lot of references need to be updated, correct citation links and find more reliable source. I think adding more information about global marketing could make this page better.