User:Shiryl82/Bigeye barracuda/Palma AJ Peer Review

General info
Shiryl82
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shiryl82/Bigeye_barracuda?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bigeye barracuda

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Shiryl, I like your topic on the Bigeye Barracuda. Good job including the physical description of the fish and where it can be found. One thing that you could include is how the fish is used around the world for example if the fish is eaten around the world, how it is caught, and how it is prepared. There are some grammatical errors throughout your draft such as forgetting to include the word "to" and forgetting some commas. It would also improve your article if you were to split up your article into sections and adding sub-headings.