User:Shizeimay/1930 Argentine coup d'état/Capricon13 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Zachary. Username: Shizeimay.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shizeimay/1930_Argentine_coup_d%27%C3%A9tat?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1930 Argentine coup d'état

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: He as not added to the lead yet, but is planning to. The topic sentnace cearly describes the main topic which is the September Coup. Orignally the Articles only section was the huge lead. This lead section I believe is too detailed. I think the Lead should be short, giving an overview of the articles main points. To help I would use the infromation in the lead section to create various sections. Possible sections: Who supported the coup. and The aftermath of the coup.

Content: The content added is relevant to the topic. It helps to expand in what lead up to the coup. I would add more details to the background section just so the reader can fully understand the causes. I would add some more content to this page. It could be benifial to add who the main people were in the Coup. This could be a section that is added.

Tone and Balance: The added Content is neutral. I would try and expand on the content. Right now the lead section is overpowering and could be split up.

Sources: On the original article there are 11 sources added. The rough draft right now only has 1 new sources, but I know that Zachary plans to add more.

Organization: I believe the content would be essair to read if there were more sub titles so the information was divied up more. It would not hurt to add more sections that relate to the important topics of the coup.

The content added to the improvemnt to the source. Zachary added some background infomation that helped me to better understand what caused the coup to occur.

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