User:Shizeimay/1930 Argentine coup d'état/Grizz99 Peer Review

General info
Shizeimy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shizeimay/1930_Argentine_coup_d%27%C3%A9tat?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1930 Argentine coup d'état

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)