User:Shreya.C123/History of tea in India/JG2027 Peer Review

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Hey Shreya,

Great job on your article, I found it to be quite intriguing. To start off, great job citing new information and adding it to the article, very advanced move on your part. I do have some concerns over the biased language that's used throughout the article. I would try and make language less biased, however, I would still try to keep the message across about exploitation.

When it comes to the impact of this exploration, you do a great job in capturing how devastating this was for Indian farm workers and how this benefited the British. The language that you used in this was somewhat more neutral, but it still kept the message about the negative impacts. Try and apply this to the rest of the information that you have added.

Overall, I really enjoyed the reframing of information and also the new information that your presented. I found it all to be very compelling. Great job!