User:Shreya.C123/Traditional ecological knowledge/JG2027 Peer Review

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Shreya.C123
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shreya.C123/Traditional ecological knowledge
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Shreya,

Great work! I really enjoyed reading the article and all the additions that you made to the article. I see that you added new section called examples. Very advance choice. The way you defined certain notions was very straightforward and I liked the flow that followed the examples. Great job citing your sources, everything looks good!

Compared to your other article, your language is much more neutral and more descriptive. I really enjoyed the organization of the article. I don't any major suggestions, besides basic mechanics. Great job!