User:Shrimperyy/Tide pool/Anonymouse0802 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shrimperyy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Shrimperyy/Tide pool


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tide pool

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information wrote is done well and further explains the context. The addition of the long twisted hermit crab is a good example of organisms that can get caught of found in the tide pools. The sources seem like they are reliable. However, some of the citations are incomplete, possibly due to blocked sources from the school library or invalid date. The information is clear and straight to the point. Some information you could add is how and why the hermit crabs get stranded in the tide pool. You could also start a subcategory to further explain it. There are other categories that could possibly be focused on such as further explaining the mid tide zone or flora. Overall, it looks good and is a good start!