User:Shringsams/Charles McGruder III/Soccer.2315 Peer Review

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Shringsams (Charles McGruder III) (~)
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Lead

The article in its beginning stages is good so a far. I am impresses in the student work it shows that each instruction step was understood.

Tone and Balance

The article is neutral  there is not any bias and very points are good.

Content

The article is good to read also in terms of proper grammar and citation. In my opinion the article has some good information on Charles McGruder III on his life so far.

Organization

In the biography the article is very well organized including the references.

Reference

I can go to the reference page and find the specific article. If, there is any further information I would like to know about Charles McGruder III.

Overall Impressions

I would suggest that the article is continued be built on and if any more information is found during the research process it can be use. (~)