User:Shriya175/Council house/Smg02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Shriya175)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shriya175/Council_house?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Council house

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content

I think it is great that the editor is adding in a new section to the article. I appreciate that a new lens is being added to the analysis of the topic. The information seems to be up to date, though I'm not sure how recent the sources cited are. I also think it's great that there seems to be a nod to Katz' poverty definitions since that is something we covered in class! (I would add a citation to the portion discussing the place definition of poverty though to credit Katz).

Overall, I think that this addition would be good for the article and continue to build on information presented!