User:Shrkym/Midlothian, Virginia/AlrightAliyah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shrkym


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shrkym/Midlothian,_Virginia?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Midlothian, Virginia
 * Midlothian, Virginia

Evaluate the drafted changes
At first I was confuse on how you did the outline because comparing it with the original article, it seemed like most of the work was published already. But now, I realized that you took a section and add the information you find to the section. I think you are doing a good job and your sandbox is full of information on Midlothian, VA. I have nothing to critque except making the information you added more noticeable. I believe you do that in the "Lead" section. Other than that, you are doing a good job! I hope eventually we can get more information on Midlothian present day like what is going on in that city now.