User:ShuchaoYe/Sulfur assimilation/Sggeer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ShuChaoYe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sulfur assimilation
 * Sulfur assimilation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the details you have added thus far. In terms of further edits: you could possibly add more sources to corroborate the current content. I also noticed a spelling error in the lead section--"chloroplates" should be "chloroplasts". "Recuded" should be changed to "reduced". "Further more" should be "Furthermore". Additionally, I think the last sentence of the lead section should be omitted, as it does not directly pertain to the assimilation of sulfur. Great job so far!