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Censorship in Japan
Content


 * The article is short as it lacks information on censored material besides pornography and needs to focus more on the history of censorship in each era
 * Should add more information on the role of censorship in the current society and the specifics on how the government censors
 * Talks about the changes in censorship law over the years but did not explicitly state the Japanese laws

Tone


 * Fairly neutral, but need to incorporate more information from different perspectives

Citation


 * Missing sources and proper citations



Internet Water Army
Content


 * The article is rated as Star class which needs more addition and improvement as it lacks information and is poorly organized in its content structure; however, the content is relevant as it includes the origination of the term and how it is being exercised in China
 * Though the article did precisely explain the history and origination of the term, the structure of the article should be focus more on the current impact on society and how it has evolved over the years
 * Focused a lot on outside examples and comparisons while lacking in precise explanation of the term and should expand the "tactics" section more
 * Include more on the impacts not only from the government but from corporations which is what is generally used in today

Tone


 * Fairly neutral; did incorporate different sources/perspectives from researchers, media outlets, and etc

Citation


 * Has great citations backing up claims, mainly articles from Chinese outlets but did include some outside of China
 * Should adapt more sources outside of China to incorporate an international outlook on the topic
 * Generally reliable

Relevancy


 * Relates class discussion on the role of the government on censorship and suppression, especially on the possibility of changing people's beliefs
 * Also includes the ramification of such censorship and how people adapts and reacts regarding such action

Film censorship in China
Content


 * The article contains the history of film censorship in China starting from the 1910s to current including specific guidelines production companies have to follow in order to receive approval from the Chinese government and a list of banned and edited films
 * The article is organized by decades which shows the transformation of film censorship; need to add more relevant effects and comparisons

Tone


 * Written neutrally; incorporated different perspectives from different eras of history

Citations


 * Had great citations backing up but need more to cite more

Relevancy


 * Discusses governmental suppression not only in a news form but also media outlet and the impact that censorship has in media arts

YouTube Copyright Issues
Content


 * This article is also S class which needs a lot of improvement because it only consists of two major controversy in 2013 and 2015, lacking information on the origination and precise impact of the issue
 * Add more information on the history, origination, current impacts, and recent issues

Tone


 * Fairly neutral

Citations


 * Need more citations since there are a lot that are missing

Relevancy


 * Relates to class readings on copyright issues, law and current social media platform such as facebook which we have discussed