User:Shumway/sandbox

that read like an advert.

Removed accommodation and features section that read like an advert. Consolidated history section. Added transport section and merged with railway section. Added today section with economical references.

Got around to editing this article further. I've consolidated the history section which went on for far too long and repeated statements in some paragraphs, and put dates into chronological order. Reduced the photos to thumbnail size. Created a "Today" section with references to Daylesford's economy and festivals which isn't complete and still reads too heavily like an advert. Added a transport section talking about major roads, with PT (bus routes) to be added in the future. Removed a massive section that just listed names of restaurants and hotels that had been added recently by anonymous users.

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