User:Shuyanz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
PC game

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
First of all, because I'm interested in games. So I would love to see more explanations of the game on this site. This will help more people understand the game better. Because some people have some extreme understanding of games, I hope to enrich the definition of games through my own sharing. I also wish I could learn more about games. I also want to share this knowledge with my friends. So when I was looking for articles about games, I came across this one. I think I can analyze this article. So this article appealed to me.

Evaluate the article
First, this article has a brief introduction to the game. It then uses a rising example to start introducing the whole article. He cites a popular game to make it easier for readers to understand. Then the author writes about the history of Pc games. The history section is an important part of the whole article. Therefore, the author uses a lot of descriptions and uses a lot of proper nouns to explain. Introduced how the game developed. But I think the author should highlight the historical part. The author's content follows his subject. The author writes about many aspects of the game. But the balance of content needs to be improved. It's not a good balance. It's like there's too much in front and too little behind. So I think it would be better to add some parts appropriately. In terms of quoting, I think the author should cite a more authoritative work to prove his point. In fact, some pictures and videos can be added to this article to better understand the effect. The talk Page for this article is good. Because he adds a lot of points. And have a discussion with everyone. Make the article more rich.