User:Sibusiso Mahlangu/Communication theory/DrCooper9 Peer Review

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Sibusiso Mahlangu


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 * Communication Theory

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I think that it is a good start to the new sections you are going to add. One thing that maybe you can look at instead of making new section for new modes of communication is could that be added to the section called Models and Elements of Communication Theory instead of making a new section? One thing about the content is it is not very to read and just seems as if it is definitions, maybe add a little more than just single sentences about a topic.