User:Siddy.sk2/Freestyle swimming/Jalengrable Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Siddy.sk2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Freestyle swimming


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

Is the Article concise or is it overly detailed? I feel like the article is concise throughout the entire lead

Content

Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, they added a whole paragraph explaining the origin of freestyle

Tone and Balance

Are their viewpoints overreptersented or underrepersented? The viewpoints on the entire article are overrepresented I feel like there are many details in the whole article

Organization

Is the content added well written? Yes, I feel like they added what they needed to add for this first rough draft for this article

Images and Media

Are the images well captioned? Yes

Overall impressions

My overrall impressions of the article is I think it is very well written but I think there are still things that can still be added but I can be wrong since there might not be a lot of articles on freestyle swimming.