User:Sidharth S Mahadeo/Staatsolie Maatschappij Suriname/Lily.sophia.kate Peer Review

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Sidharth S Mahadeo
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 * Staatsolie Maatschappij Suriname
 * Staatsolie Maatschappij Suriname

Evaluate the drafted changes
All of Sidharth's contributions are relevant to the article and maintain a neutral tone throughout. In terms of organization, the content is well-written and clear, however, it could be improved by switching up the sentence structure or combining some of the shorter sentences to enhance the flow of the writing. For example, instead of saying "On 25 November 1982, first drilling started in Tambaredjo. In 1988 the first crude oil was exported to Trinidad and Tobago." the article could read, "Drilling started in Tambaredjo on November 25, 1982, and In 1988, the first crude oil was exported to Trinidad and Tobago." Also, adding some commas would help make the writing flow better as well.

One thing that can be improved on is the sources to this article. The drafted contribution does not link to any reliable secondary sources, instead citing the oil company's website (which the article is about) and another Wikipedia article. Adding sources such as peer-reviewed articles would help make this contribution more reliable and unbiased. Also, the company website is cited two separate times instead of simply re-using the same citation. Besides these changes, this is overall a good contribution draft.