User:Siena1018/Discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS/Morré Taylor Peer Review

I really enjoyed reading your Wiki page. The way you divided your page into sections was also really smart and easy to follow. Your sections on Blood Bans and the effects of Covid-19 on people with HIV were especially strong. Overall, your writing is very clear and has a really good neutral tone. If you wanted to, you could create a section that focused on racial disparities in terms of disease susceptibility or perhaps you could talk about racial disparity when you talk about incarcerated individuals' vulnerability to the disease.

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