User:Silmarlu/Eastern Yugur language/Jiayun Chen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Silmarlu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Eastern Yugur language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eastern Yugur language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The Lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer. The Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. The Lead includes a brief description of the article's major sections. The Lead is concise, but I suggest to move some of the information to the body paragraph, because it is a little long.

Content
The content is added relevant to the topic. The content is added up-to-date. The article deals with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. It addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics.

Tone and Balance
Yes, the article is neutral in tone; there are no biases found! As there aren't really viewpoints so much as there are facts, I do not believe the question regarding viewpoints in the writing applies. No persuasion tactics are applied.

Sources and References

The sources are fine. They do work when open them. They are by diverse authors.

Organization

The content is well-organized and well written.

Images and Media

There are no images, and I suggest adding some showing the geographical information of the language, or people speaking the language.

Overall impression:

The page is good so far, I am looking forward to see more information in process, and it surely will be a good page.

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