User:Silouettee20/Church Rockshelter No. 2 Site/Eirbouh Peer Review

Peer review
I really enjoyed reading your article. I think it was fascinating learning about the ceramic artifacts that were found. It was also really interesting to learn about the kind of tools that were found in the stone artifacts portion of your page. Do you know if the artifacts that were found, if any of them were complete, or if they were all broken ceramics or tools.

The one thing I would suggest is to add anything else you can think of to buff up the intro. It's short, and straight to the point which is great, but if there was anything else you could give us so we have an overall sense of the site that would be very helpful. Like for example how far away it is from the capital of North Carolina, what the area around the site is like. Also is there a link you can add for Charles Church can we can click on to learn more about? That was the frustrating thing for me was that somethings that I wanted to link to my article were just impossible because they did not already have their own wiki-page.

All together though I think you did a great job! You left any sense of writer's tone, and nothing about your article makes it sound like you are trying to persuade any readers. You presented just the facts, and kept it interesting for readers to read through and be left curious to learn more.