User:Siluna/Group 10 element/Kyraa.lien Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Siluna


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Siluna/Group_10_element?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Group 10 element

Evaluate the drafted changes
No changes have been made to the lead, which is not currently present in the Sandbox draft. Once contributions are more or less finalized, summarizing the additions in the lead would be helpful. The content in the article is relevant to the topic, though there is definitely still room for further additions. The tone of the article is appropriately neutral and is well organised. Much of the information in the article would benefit from further sourcing, as most of the sources right now are only in the “History” section. Contributions at the time of writing this review seem minimal, and as such this review might not be the most constructive.