User:Sima0063/Geoconservation/Saraberger Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sima0063


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sima0063/Geoconservation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Geoconservation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Geoconseration is a very cool topic to choose for this assignment. My main comment is simply just about citing. It looks like you added the citations at the end of a couple sentences that came from the same source, but I think in the modules it mentioned adding citations every new sentence that proposes new information. So, adding a couple more citations may be helpful. The information that was added is informative and contains a neutral tone.