User:Sima0063/Geoconservation/Such0051 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sima0063


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sima0063/Geoconservation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Geoconservation

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks like a great addition to the existing article. The lead looks really good, but I would try to incorporate your new information into the existing lead rather than changing the lead altogether. The content of the article is great. I think that all of the information you provide is useful and relevant. The content is up to date and the article addresses geoconservation in Africa, which may have been overlooked in the original article. The tone of the article is neutral and unbiased. The information is presented very clearly. The sources look like they are up to date, and in-article citations are in the correct format. Links to the sources also work. This article is very well organized. One thing you could do is separate African examples of geoconservation by country, but that might make too small sections. There were no grammar or spelling issues. I would suggest adding images of geoconserved sites to the page. The content you added is very good and helps make the existing article complete. Good work!