User:Simone.eloise/Worker bee/Bibliography

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The paragraph on brood temperature is poorly written in the "Worker Bee" article, seeing unscientific and unspecific. I plan on incorporating the source above, [1], to transition the paragraph to include more scientific information and be more specific.

The whole article really just needs to sound more scientific and more composed, at a lot of places the wording sounds informal and wrong. Especially later in the article, there are entire sections based off of one source, which could be unreliable or false. I also found a source from 2006 that can only be accessed by the archive web machine, which means the article no longer exists today and should be updated.