User:Simonek0929/ATEEZ ZERO: FEVER EPILOGUE/Jameshu1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Simonek0929


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Simonek0929/ATEEZ_ZERO%3A_FEVER_EPILOGUE?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * none

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * great work making an entirely new wiki article on this album!
 * i made some small wording changes, and I would reread the article to make sure each sentence is fluently worded.
 * although I'm sure they make great music, I would avoid words like "amazing" or "successful" as they shed some of your own opinion onto what should be a completely neutral article. I have removed a few of these biased words.
 * great job making a new tracklist table!
 * I would be consistent with the album name. Is it all capitalized or just normal? ex. ZERO vs. Zero