User:Simpson Hannah/Language education in the United States/Garzaju Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Simpson Hannah


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Simpson%20Hannah/Language_education_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language education in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that Hannah added (Rise of Multilingualism) was a good contribution but it was not touched on in the article. She used two reliable sources, one being a source used in class. The content added is concise and to the point. The content is well written and easy to follow. The only thing that I would say is that the lead does not reflect the content discusses. Overall, a great addition to the article.