User:Simpson Hannah/Language education in the United States/Tedrickja Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Simpson, Hannah


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Simpson%20Hannah/Language_education_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language education in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe that you added some detail to this already almost complete article. Your citations match up to the content, and provide an appropriate level of clout. I believe that some correcting and refinement of sentence structure, and perhaps a few more sentences/concrete examples, would be beneficial.