User:Simpson Hannah/Language education in the United States/Zerocarey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Simpson Hannah


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Simpson%20Hannah/Language_education_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language education in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your sources are cited correctly, reliable and related to our course materials. You didn't put the part of the article that you are editing in your sandbox but rather where your edit to the article should go? Under article draft I believe your edited version goes there, in the sandbox I believe is where you paste the original article and mess around with edits there.