User:Simrankhehra/User:Annie377/Michael C. Hsiung/Simrankhehra Peer Review

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Annie377


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 * Peer review of "/Michael C. Hsiung"


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 * User:Annie377/Michael C. Hsiung

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Excellent sources that discuss Hsiung's background and experience. The introductory can elaborate more on this outline that discuss the contents illustrated in the article (optional). In the biography, there are minor edits to consider, such as capitalising the "t" for Tumblr and closing the space for the dash that is in "half fish —a merman." In addition, to add the year of the artist's birth date (if possible) after his name in the introductory line (Michael C. Hsiung, [insert birth date]".

Under the section for "Career," it is noted that the comma is marked after the cited source. As presented,


 * Think Tank Gallery (2012)[7],
 * the Chinese American Museum (2014)[9],

For this, you may reformat this by inserting the comma after the date. For example, "Think Tank Gallery (2012),[7]" as you continue throughout Hsiung's experience. Likewise, at the end of the section for "Career," the following was presented:


 * MetroArt[17].[18]

The period ends after one source, but exempts the secondary source after the period mark. In lieu, reformat it to: MetroArt.[17][18]

Aside from this, this article has credible sources that overviews Hsiung and his background in art. There are no other errors identified in the article. The only link to consider removing is "https://format-com-cld-res.cloudinary.com/image/private/s--pDSudKvE--/c_crop,h_1198,w_1800,x_0,y_0/c_fill,g_center,h_506,w_760/fl_keep_iptc.progressive,q_95/v1/5d7413166f61059292b973adaff18622/Artists_Republic_Grand_Opening_Flyer.jpg" from the "External" section on sources. This can be simplified in Hsiung's experience, and it may help to have a secondary source to solidify this information (such as the gallery it was exhibited, other articles that discuss about this event, etc.)