User:Sintim24/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating an article called Low pressure receptors.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I wanted to chose an article that was an important aspect of cell biology. This topic focuses on cell signaling. Also, I wanted to chose an article that I feel would need a lot more work on. I noticed that there were only 2 sources used as well, so other sources may have other information about this topic that is missing.

Evaluate the article
The first sentence in the article is a good sentence starter. It is not overdetailed at all; it is actually the opposite. I honestly think that the reason why there is not a lot about this topic is because there is probably not that much to talk about in this topic. I think this would be better off being included in another article instead of standing alone. In the article, I like that every word that people may not understand have links for better explanations instead of just being there. The article is neutral. I don't think the topic really gives that much space for it to be biased. There are only 2 sources in the article, a few more would be better. Also, there are no images. I don't know if it really needs any, but maybe if it did include any it would probably be how it would look like in the body (the reaction).