User:Siobhanr8/Salmon Brook, Connecticut/Oeldaa Peer Review

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THE ACTUAL REVIEW- Eldaa
What the article does well:

- Easy to read and understand.

- Gives clear data and statistics.

- Reliable sources.

What changes would you suggest?

- I'm not sure if this ventures into opinion and is not allowed, but the article is very information and numbers-based. It becomes boring to read after a while. Nothing wrong with that, not all articles are going to be all fun and games. However, I would suggest trying to find maybe testimonials of the members of this community or real-life examples. Just make sure to be weary of opinion.

Anything from this article that I could use in my own article?

- The use of statistics and numbers. This makes the article look professional and well-established.

Article length and sections:

- I think that a small section stating what a "CDP" is could help lead to a better understanding.

- A section that would talk about the value that this town gives to other parts of Connecticut could be good.

- A history of the town could also be good.

- Are there any attractions, churches, or sights to see?