User:Siot0819/Religion/StasiaTaylor Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Sioto819 (70.162.195.156)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:70.162.195.156/sandbox

Lead

 * The Lead has not been updated because my partner just added a needed citation to an article.

Content

 * The content is relevant because the article needed a citation that wasn't from an untrustworthy report.

Tone and Balance

 * The content is neutral and does not persuade me one way or another.

Sources and References

 * The source she found is credible and does lead back to a credible author. The source is a book published by U.S. Institute of Peace, which is a federal organization that promotes conflict resolution and prevention worldwide. The organization is federal which means this book had to go through many editors before it was approved by the government.

Organization

 * There is no content here it just a needed citation.

Images and Media

 * My peer did not have media and did not need to add one.

Overall impressions
The content is needed to the article because before the article had bad sources. Now it has a clear source that a student reviewing the article can see and use for a scholarly report.