User:SirLeMonk/Fáfnir/21RowRowRoYourBoat89 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

"SirLeMonk"


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User :SirLeMonk/F%C3%A1fnir?action=edit
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fafnir]]
 * Fafnir]]

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I would say that this has the making of being a very bountiful contribution. It is difficult to go through all aspects of this review as there was not much except for a few sentences of possible suggestions for incorporation of materials to improve. This article seems contains a very parred down summation of the story, but for the purposes of this assignment, it may be worth it to expand on some of the content. The content of the section "Narrative," I feel, could be broken down into different segments of the overall story. I found that as I was reading it, I was thoroughly enticed to know more, yet I had difficulty understanding who was who and what part of the story their placement existed within. So far as I could tell, this user has not currently added anything into the main article itself yet. It would be interesting to know what other plans or possible edits they have ideas for in order to further assess the direction of this project. There were solidly four sources that I saw, and upon checking them out, they all appear appropriate in terms of the type of information they confer. Although I know that the article is about Fafnir, it may be helpful to, like mentioned in this user's sandbox, add more abstract background information to how this mythological creature came to fruition. In terms of Norse mythology, because these sagas are from long before national boundaries were established, do they refer to (in this story) a particular region that you can tell? No new images were noted from this user. My best feedback would just be to delve into this topic and don't wait too long to develop something to contribute.