User:Siranov/Edward T. Ross/KennethCaslib Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zhangir Siranov


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Siranov/Edward_T._Ross?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After the reviewing the article, it is eloquently written in a way for readers to fully understand when researching Edward T. Ross and is seeking for more information about his background and bibliography. The content provided is written very well with great vocabulary and no grammar mistakes. Although my peer is not completely finished with the article, it is amazingly organized section by section, making it extremely easy to read. His utilization of sources and in text citations is extremely well, allowing me to easily check the background and ensuring that the sources used are reliable and trustworthy. All of the links work perfectly fine and I am able to access all of the references used. At the moment, there are no images or media on the page because my peer is not completely finished with his page yet, but soon he will add photos/media. My peer also exceeds the use of 2-3 reliable secondary sources and is continuing to add more sources as he finishes his page. However, there may be some factors on this page that can be improved and strengthen. Some of the sections with information are a little short, with very small sentences and my peer can improve this by elaborating more on the information provided, and possibly add more information to some of the sections. For instance, for the "Sanitary Planning and Engineering", my peer can add more information about his planning and engineering, and what achievements he acquired during this time. Additionally, he may even elaborate more on the information provided about his planning and engineering in Galt.