User:Siranov/Edward T. Ross/RyanVpacific Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zhangir Siranov


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Siranov/Edward_T._Ross?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Siranov/Edward_T._Ross?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content is explained very well. I recommend including on what he did as an engineer. Like what did he do specifically, what achievements did he achieve, how did he impact as a sanitarian, etc. You can possibly include what on how contributed to "The Sanitarian." The work is very neutral, no bias in any sentence and is very well written. Some strengths to your writing is how fast the author gets to the point. Overall, this is very well written. One last tip, is to add more information about the guy on his personal achievements and his impact as a Sanitarian.