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Is her husband's occupation relevant to her article?

Why does Adrien Henri get special mention as a poet she invited if there were other? Should this be taken out?

Should it say what about the works was too radical and got her fired?

should the "series of further illnesses" be elaborated on? Or were they not public information?

when did they purchase the mill building?

If the multisensory installations were a series, why do we only know about the most famous and the last? Would it be possible to add the names, dates and locations of the other installations? Would it be possible to add sections on her installations or on different categories of her works? One for installations and one for dollmaking etc.?

I think this is a super run on sentence "A series of further illnesses limited Barker's artistic output throughout the 1970s but she and her husband did establish a business, Barkers of Lanercost that produced period costume dolls, soft toys and reproductions of artefacts from the Roman fort at Vindolanda."

would it be possible to change the language from "pwd" to "disabled persons"? Can find a statement by an organization on why that's preferred

Topic Change: Lela Lee
Angry Little Girls was developed from Kim, the "Angry Little Asian Girl", a character she developed in 1994 when she was a sophomore at UC Berkeley. She developed the character after attending Spike and Mike's Sick and Twisted Festival of Animation with a friend. (added citation 3) That same night after getting home from the animation festival, Lee stayed up drawing with typing paper, crayola markers, and a video camera (added citation 3b) and made the first episode "Angry Little Asian Girl, the First Day of School." (added citation 1)

Three years after initially creating the first episode of the Angry Little Asian Girl, she created four more, and sent the five episodes titled Angry Little Asian Girl, Five Angry Episodes to festivals where they were well-reviewed by critics of the LA Times and LA Weekly. (added citation 2)These episodes, like the first, use foul language and shocking imagery to bring attention to issues surrounding the intersection of being Asian and a woman. (added sentence 1)

She realized she had hit a nerve. She had the idea to make a batch of T-shirts. She quickly sold out by word of mouth, prompting her to launch a shop on the website www.angrylittleasiangirl.com in late 1997. She packed the shirts herself and mailed the orders every morning from the neighborhood post office. She also kept shirts in the back of her station wagon with a cash box and a card table and sold shirts wherever she could. The shirts sold out many times over. (added citation 2b)

She took 2 years to teach herself how to draw comics with books checked out from the library. With the newly created characters, and an umbrella name of "Angry Little Girls" which included other girls; Deborah the disenchanted princess, Maria the crazy little Latina, Wanda the fresh little soul sistah, and Xyla the gloomy girl, Lee turned it into a weekly comic strip self-published on her website www.angrylittlegirls.com. Lee added these characters of diverse ethnicities and backgrounds to increase her strip's public and commercial appeal. She began submitting her comic strips to newspaper syndicates. (added sentence 2) (clarified sentence) Lee's comic strips were published in several collections with the publisher Harry N. Abrams' imprint Abrams Comic Arts. (added sentence 3)

Books Authored
Angry Little Girls (2005)

Still Angry Little Girls (2006)

Angry Little Girls in Love (2008)

Angry Little Girls: A Little Book of Love (2008)

Fairy Tales for Angry Little Girls (2011)

Angry Little Girls: A Little Kit for Friends (2013)