User:Siroisj2499/Climate of Anchorage/Izzy Eckert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Siroisj2499


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Siroisj2499/Climate_of_Anchorage?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate of Anchorage

Evaluate the drafted changes
As of now, I do not think that I can give a full and thorough peer review for Joey's article.

While correcting grammar is important, more resources and content also needs to be added to the article. From what I can tell, there have not been any additions to the content of the article yet.

When I read the original article, I found that there is a lot of room for improvement. Different Subsections could be added, explanations of images could be added, and adding to subsections that are already present with not much, if any, information.

That is all I can say as of now until there is more content added.