User:Siroisj2499/Climate of Anchorage/Lglayman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Siroisj2499


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Siroisj2499/Climate_of_Anchorage?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate of Anchorage

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

"Climate change is something the city acknowledges and has plans for" is already covered in the lead, and can be incorporated into a smaller sentence of the lead paragraph.. additions and sources are unifies and content is sufficient to add information.