User:Siryi Santos/sandbox

= Article Evaluation = The article I chose to evaluate is called "Multiracial feminist theory

Upon reading this article, I immediately began noticing a few things that could be improved. The first sentence mentions that it is a theory that is "thought to have gained momentum in the 70's by feminist women of color". The phrase "thought to have" is mentioned without referencing who in particular decided on when and who thought this. This also brings up the question about whether or not they would be considered a reliable source. Another edit that can be made would be in regards to who is said to have introduced the idea in the first place; "feminist women of color". This infers that a group of specific people had brought the theory to light but does not specify who they are nor where this information is coming from. It appears as though someone has already pointed this out but adding "[who?]" next to it.

The article then continues to mention a book written in 1996 and gives a quick description about it including an intersectional analysis. the words "intersectional analysis" are hyperlinked to another page however when clicked, it appears as though the page does not exist. This marks the end of the leading section.

The leading section does not provide reliable sources nor a clear understandable summary or description of what the theory is. The mentioning of the book is not necessary and does not contribute any actual content in regards to the idea being presented.