User:Sisyphus27/Jacqueline Valenzuela/Al5299 Peer Review

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Sisyphus27's article on Jacqueline Valenzuela.
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For the lead, I suggest avoiding using present tense terms since the information is not constantly being updated. So for the line: "Jacqueline Valenzuela (born 1997)^[1] is a multimedia artist known for practicing art using different mediums and creating art pieces that represent her identity as a Chicana lowrider and its underrepresented community." I suggest a change to "[...] multimedia artist with practice creating art pieces using different mediums that represent her identity [...]" Also, fixing their citations since I don't think "^[1]" is the proper citation linking feature.

Use exact details about the known awards and grants in the Art section instead of just and "much more" because Wikipedia is factual. Include citation at the end of the sentence.

References and external links are well organized, similar structure of separating the heading and text body should we used for the artwork such that, "Jealousy: This work by Jacqueline Valenzuela [...]" should be:

"Jealously

This work by Jacqueline Valenzuela [...]"

Aside from formatting and the use of present tense words, the information is straightforward and well organized.