User:Sixtompacheco/2000s in fashion/Adirago Peer Review

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Sixtompacheco
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The lead into your article is really good and caught my attention quickly. Being in The Bronx, I love the fact that information included in your article pertains to The Bronx and discusses some of the history of the Burrough we are currently living in. I also really like the connections between fashion and music in the 2000s. I think one thing that could be cool to add is pictures of the popular musicians/rappers of the time and the types of outfits that people were wearing. By adding pictures of the people who paved the way in the fashion and hip hop industry, it may help people make connections between the people and the impacts that they had on the industries. Overall, I really like this article and find it super interesting and well written!