User:Siyu Han/Web Influencer Culture/Rhiannongro Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Siyu Han


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Web Influencer Culture


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Web Influencer Culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
What are netizens?

The definition that you have stated is quite illusive, what do you mean by pure?

How are they "the collective memory of all Chinese people?"

In my experience, I think a huge part of web influencers is the mysteriously amounts of money that they make, I think this would be an interesting point of inquiry.

I think the leading descriptor of an influencer is not quite clear, and there are often points of grammar mishaps. As this article is a new one, I would say yes you have the right amount of sources which I trust are all reliable. I wonder if the perspective of this information doesn't give a worldly view, maybe this could be improved by a change in title referring to web influencers of a certain culture?